Wow um first journal!!!!!! I am writing a story on fiction press and I wondered if these few lines sounded good(ish) xD
I looked around me. There was a foreboding mist that filled the hallways of the school. Strange... I could have sworn I saw something. I could here the distant screaming that echoed through my ears like church bells. Although this school looks empty... Its filled with mysteries that will make your spine tingle in fright. In the world we with in now... Its normal to feel that way because every second we live we... poison ourselves with guilt and misery.